Beautiful Metaphor

a race to the top, both competitive one would do anything to win and one just wanted to see how far he would go having fun along the way, as could be seen when he smiled when he was riding snoopy. and the other was so determined to get to the top by any means neccesary even if he was miserable, as could be seen by punching snoopy off his dog house, (which was really funny). and at the end the "loser" just sat marveling at what he had accomplished and the "winner" just spiraled into nothing and dissapeared. i saw the finish line as being fragile and not really as beautitful as the race and the scenery around there, and the "loser" saw that also and decided to be content with what he had and gotten. the ending quote fit nicely with the moral of the flash, and it was just amazing. great job, kudos and congratulations.

Brilliant

Reminded me so much of a poem a buddy of mine wrote.
i think (like that of which everyone else is saying or has already said) that this was brilliant, and the underlying message is so true.
10/10